Baz Luhrman was a film creator ,he was the person who made the mordern day Romeo and Juliet.This film was made to  encourage viewers to have the ability to comprehend this Shakespearean text into mordern day text.There are many interpretations within this mordern day film but the obvious and formost is the interpretation between the swords in the play and the guns in the film.This is the is the interpratation i chose because this inspired me to like a shakesperean play.Usually i find shakespeare quite boring but when Baz Luhrman interpretated guns too swords.I thought “Wow” this is actually going to get interesting.I believe that Baz Luhrman didn`t just use this interpretation to make an understanding out of us but to actually he made the play interesting on his own imagination.

I like where you’re going with this.

You might want to use the ideas we went over in today’s lesson to improve the writing style you’re using to express your ideas. The main point is that your ideas are great – the job now is to improve your writing skill so you can express them on the page (or blog, as the case may be)

I’ll comment again once you’ve re-drafted it.

CW